Draft- Ella
Early one morning Samantha was sleeping, when a screaming noise came in through her . She slowly opened her eyes while her mums face was in front of her. She jumped up and with that she started to get ready. Samantha Then ran down the stairs and into the kitchen and made herself breakfast , mum walked in and said “What are you eating ?” and “how does it taste” Samantha just looked and mum walked off. She got into the car. They were driving , brother jimmy said “Is there something wrong with it or is it just me?”. Then few hours later we had pies and “ I just couldn’t eat it so I threw it out the window”
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