Character descriptson

My Brother

My brother Tyler is 5 years old. He has short dark blonde hair with glowing blue eyes and he is very tall, his hand are half the size of mine.

Tyler is very creative but very messy at the same time.
He is very cute when he jumps up and down when he see’s me, but when you get to know him he is as cheeky as a monkey.

Tyler always wears hoodies and a great smile he is crazy with fun sprinkled on top. Even though he can be annoying he is the best brother ever.

Sick sentences

Sick sentences

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1. Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary.

Sam and the skydivers grip onto each other . As they were high up. It was terrifying.

2.) The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had horns

The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had horns

Pollution in our sea’s (speech)

Pollution in our sea’s  (speech)

1.) Intro

Can think of  loads of sea creatures who are dying because of your rubbish!?  Rubbish that you can’t be bothered to put in a bin!  Like your chippie packet and glad wrap that was around your delicious sandwich at lunchtime. This pollution  needs to stop. You are killing our oceans.

2.)what happens when you drop your rubbish

When you grab your ham and cheese sandwich ready to toast. You unwrap it and then drop the rubbish and think it will just stay there. BUT NO the next day it is pouring down outside your little piece of gladwrap starts heading down for the drain. Then it's in the drain and is making its way to the sea. It floats out of the drain and then a baby sea turtle swims into the glad wrap then YOU BECOME A MURDER!!!

3.)Animals

Each year 1 million seabirds and 100,000 sea mammals are killed and suffocated BY PLASTIC  and we are losing most of our sea animals because of this.Soon they will all be extinct from the rubbish That you drop.

4.)the ending

So I hope you understand how bad pollution is and how big it is to our sea animals this shouldn't be happening if we all didn't litter.and it may be happening couse of our rubbish

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Halloween madness

- Say                        Hallawen madness

- Look

- Actions

“Mum where’s my costume” screams Abby “it’s in the closet ” said mum. Abby ran and got it she was mumbling
“ where’s my unicorn” I opened the closet and what is that?. A  knight a. . . a viking. I got it on and I hated it. MUMMY why did you buy me this . “it looks so cute on you” said mum Abby fround and got her lolly basket and went trick or treat at one house a kid opened the door and stole a hand full of candy. She screamed and ran to the next house to get candy with her friend when she got home. Abby left the candy on the bench and walked to get changed into her pj’s , when she came back down the stairs the candy basket was gone.

 

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Photo writing

One day I was walking down the street on my holiday . . . Well not so much. I was jumping from roof to roof as in my supergirl suit on a mission looking for joker. As I was jumping over an alleyway as I saw a purple hat and I guessed it was joker so I jumped down . Then saw it was, so I and flew up with joker under my arm and took him to jail .On the way back to my headquarters  and told Superman that I captured joker he was embarrassed because he had tried to catch him before and failed . The next day Superman and I were walking down one of the main streets in new york and there were lots of billboards around, out of  the side of my eye , me on a billboard , in my uniform on the big board so I told superman and he was having a straight face on.

(I think it's because he hasn’t be on a big tv or Billboard) all the media and and paparazzi were all taking photo’s and asking me to go on the red carpet to the disney awards show and I said “Well um yes” I was so happy.The next day I was up early getting my uniform all ready and my hair and stuff, then the limo came and we went.