Selfie Writting

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Selfie Writing - 2nd Draft

I was just walking down to the  beach of California and what's that? That over there oh, it's such a beautiful rock and it was painted . Wait WHAT it’s it’s me what? . I rubbed my eyes and it was still here I once again rubbed them again and it was still there so I kept walking. Then when I came closer to the rock ( to be truthful I really thought it was amazing ) I saw there were hearts as you know I am supergirl. As this was just getting in my brain I thought “ Wow I love my fans”. And then Oh all the Paparazzi started running up with their

cameras and phones sounding like a swarm of rattlesnakes shaking their tails.  I was just like Oh, Um, hi/bye .  I flew up up and away and smiled for some photos in the air than flew away like supergirl  .

100 word stroy

Late one afternoon my family and I went to the zoo. We hopped out of the car and ran inside. Within the small orange door way was a big wide new world stepping into. Mum walked into the cafe so we followed behind , a man was picking something off the top self when it all COLLAPSED  the man looked in shock . Mum got a coffee and we went into the zoo . The first thing we did was go to see  the crocodile . He was opening his mouth then shutting it , it was a cool sight. But my brother got scared .

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Draft -100 word story

Draft- Ella

Early one morning Samantha was sleeping, when a screaming noise came in through her . She slowly opened her eyes while her mums face was in front of her. She jumped up and with that she started to get ready. Samantha Then ran down the stairs and into the kitchen and made herself breakfast , mum walked in and said “What are you eating ?” and “how does it taste” Samantha just looked and mum walked off. She got into the car. They were driving , brother jimmy said “Is there something wrong with it or is it just me?”.  Then  few hours later we had pies and “ I just couldn’t eat it so I threw it out the window”

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Use a variety of sentence beginnings

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

Use a variety of sentence lengths   

To help you:

Use the GREEN Edingly pyramid

Dictionary/Thesaurus to search for WOW words

Sentence beginnings

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Verbs and Nouns

our class did the 6 word story these were my favourite

    “Wait is this my home planet?”

                                                     “Is there something wrong with me? “

River day

The part where I'm running into the water to 

jump  into the current  to drift all the way down it is really strong.

this is when I am playing in the river with

my friend.

Blue and Orange threadtail

Name: Blue and Orange threadtail

Aka: 2 winged spiked dragon

Scientific name: Damselflies

Classification: endangered!!!

Kingdom: Animalia

Phylum: Arthropoda

Class: Insecta

Order: Odonata

Description:They are a 35mm and they can be found the colour baby blue.

and they have 2 wings and 6 legs, they may be seen all year round.Their a brown yellow colour base wings. There are 35 types of  threadtails. They're really called a Damselflies. They are an endangered .

Helpful habits: they help by getting the moss of the rocks.

Diet: bait fish from the streams.

Last know Location: hovering over your head.

Habitat: Forest streams ,fields or swamps in Australia .

Cockroahes