Character descriptson

My Brother

My brother Tyler is 5 years old. He has short dark blonde hair with glowing blue eyes and he is very tall, his hand are half the size of mine.

Tyler is very creative but very messy at the same time.
He is very cute when he jumps up and down when he see’s me, but when you get to know him he is as cheeky as a monkey.

Tyler always wears hoodies and a great smile he is crazy with fun sprinkled on top. Even though he can be annoying he is the best brother ever.

Sick sentences

Sick sentences

Key Blue= Sick sentences Pink= fixed sentences

1. Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary.

Sam and the skydivers grip onto each other . As they were high up. It was terrifying.

2.) The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had horns

The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had horns